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LR1 – geometry and fire burned again and again

December 17, 2022 By Tim Aten 1 Comment

geometry and fire burned again and again

now. late night.
in black legacy owned tuxedo 
with white formal crisp purchased from the Orthodox in Oak Park
glossy loafers from amazon the day before
walked downtown spoke streets of new Detroit with my daughter
shuffling back after surveying the disintegration of the Detroit auto show
she did well in heels
carrying it off
reminders of a decade when we walked for college football causing blisters and slow shuffle pain where she voiced no complaint
she wants nothing more than to be back in the car on the way home to Ferndale 

now
new Detroit she looked beautiful, mature, something new not known to me in a gaze
instantly elegant, classy, and pulling off an orange gown
signifiers of Nepalese Buddhist monks, 1960s burlap tapestries and 76 orange ball gas station signs that sprinkled i-75 into 1980s Ohio

the haunting of the French colonization
the centuries of an Indigenous layout of the main streets from wampum paths
conquered by steel and plow 
mowed down for the map spokes of Paris
covered over by Cobo
geometry and fire burned again and again
floods of Detroit river
importing and exporting guns and butter for the dawn of world wars 
the blueprints to take over and liberate paris
and cascade and create the glory of a 57 Chevy

workers of the World had bled on the streets we walked that night followed by a blind pig rebellion
Detroit on the verge of rekindling the incandescence of a purple Parisian art deco fairy fantasy
in my tux bowing while the red curtain Detroit auto show fades to black for Las Vegas laser lights and mathematical markets of Beijing 
the arsenal of democracy in the rearview
back to Ferndale

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  1. Peter Marshall says

    December 19, 2022 at 12:31 am

    76 orange ball gas station signs that sprinkled i-75 into 1980s Ohio. Nice work.

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