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Running Series – apotheosis

November 27, 2023 By Tim Aten Leave a Comment

apotheosis

a committed man whose name i can’t recall 
kicked off the the 3rd annual bay to beacon ½ marathon

the sun had risen and 50 deliberate flesh-blood-breath bodies 
stood on dnr grade gravel 
  in the middle of the mile long road into negwagon state park
the committed man at the daybreak of his middle age 
talked about safety, about sponsors
his heart conveyed the land, the roads
commitment to a michigan thumb he nurtures in his visions and body movement
he thanked volunteers
then played jimi hendrix’s rendition of the star spangled banner 
                                          from the portable usb speaker and mc karaoke microphone
a small sentimental roadside gift shop wooden crossbow shot a firecracker into the forest
startled
we all fumbled for our garmins 
to set into motion our neurotic metrics

and jim and i were off

jim who slowed down to talk with me
be with me
share with me
presence and time
both of us on the ½ century foot
one piriformis
another plantar fasciitis
we shared stumbling with a rural michigan prosecuting attorney who told us about gout 
                                        and the running salvation that prevented a divorce
his entry way into conversation was big gretch, the committed governor of our state. 
we talked about her run. wondering
                                        the orange sun was positive

jim and i found respite at the st gabriel church whose cross stood humbly in front of lake huron 
at the end of the heat shimmer ashe pavement
we were given water, laughs, and jokes from 90 year olds
nourished
with real bathrooms
a positive parishioner showed me a century sanctuary with pictures of faded priests 
and crucifixes with blood and pain


we finished on the long shiny roads 
perspective points of reason to the deliberate horizon
the long road made the miles cycle faster


diana and yvette came for us at the finish line
with the friendship of apotheosis 
and a man who slowed down for me

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